Does this pt in this ch i wrote sound ok? needs rewriting? not long....?

Your writing on the whole seems accurate except for one part i realised,the last line-past tense of hang is hung not ''hanged''. Oh and i think 'to trust' is redundant.....unreliable alone is fine...or you can try ''questionable''. I'm a little confused since you didn't introduce the characters-probably done in the previous chapters? So didn't know tammy is the name of the ghost. Another suggestion is explaining why gruesome movies appeal to you? =) good job anyway