Can anyone correct my essay please?(introduction)?

Models are the most fabulous and y people alive, who would not want to be just like them? In an attempt to try to have a model‘s body shape, people might find that nothing seem to work; the desire to be skinny would ultimately have led people to the two most common eating disorders --- anorexia nervosa and bulimia nervosa. These two devastating disorders cause life-threatening conditions and depression. Although having eating disorders might allow one to look like a sickly model, the physical and psychological harm it causes definitely outweighs any perceived benefits.